Showing posts with label Lady Sarah's Redemption. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Lady Sarah's Redemption. Show all posts

Friday, November 16, 2012

Bad Reviews - the Downside of Free Promotions


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In August, after I got back the rights to my first book Lady Sarah’s Redemption, I decided to enrol it in the Kindle Select program so that I could play around with the 5 free promotion days allowed me during the 3 months exclusivity I promised Amazon.

Initially the book sold well with mostly 4 star reviews. I was pleased to see it enjoy a new lease of life as it had been first published in hard cover so was an expensive product for a debut author to promote. It was available mostly in libraries in the UK and Commonwealth.

It's by no means my best book as the first half focused on the romance while the second half ramped up the suspense and intrigue. Writing it made me realise I was as much a writer of intrigue and suspense as I was of romance, and I've learned to balance the two more successfully in my subsequent Beverley Eikli and Beverley Oakley books. Here are a couple of the Amazon reviews for Lady Sarah's Redemption.

4.0 out of 5 stars
Intriguing October 19, 2012
Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
This is quite a historical romance. I would have liked to see some sensual scenes in it, but it is full or action, scandal and quite a tumultuous love story. If you like historical fiction, this is the book for you. I was quite pleased with it.
4.0 out of 5 stars

Keeper November 7, 2012
Format:Kindle Edition
The beginning was a little confusing. After I figured out who was who, the story was wonderful with enough suspense to keep me reading to the end. The love story/ romance was clean and wholesome. The ending left you feeling warm and fuzzy.
4.0 out of 5 stars

Rachel Hyde (Myshelf Review) 
I enjoyed this twist on the old gothic novel standby plot of the governess in the mysterious household. This imaginative writer stands a lot of the expected clichés on their heads and treats the reader to something rather different and refreshing. Spoilt Lady Sarah has some lessons to learn, as does man-with-a-past Roland and his "ugly duckling" daughter Caro. There are some surprising turns in this novel and the characters find themselves in rather more peril than might be surmised by reading the above description. The ending is a bit far-fetched in some respects, but don't let that put you off diving into this talented new writer's debut novel. If you think standard Regencies need a bit of shaking up, then this might fit the bill.


I'd written my first romance at the age of 17, so 23 years later when Lady Sarah's Redemption was published the the elation I felt at seeing it in print was overwhelming at the time. I really was like a new mother.

Obviously time and distance mutes these feelings while the thick skin we develop through countless rejections during our unpublished years stands us in good stead if or when we get less than favourable reviews, later.

Bad reviews can sting but they’re inevitable and one can’t afford to be a delicate little petal when confronted with screaming headlines which proclaim our hard work as ‘Dull and Boring’. After checking out my latest Amazon reviews, this was the last thing I read before I closed my computer to go to sleep last night. Rather than drift off thinking about how much someone disliked my book I was more interested in mulling over the curious phenomenon of people who publicly revile a ‘free purchase’ they’d never have bought in the first place.

So, this is by my dissatisfied reader who admits she never got beyond the first few pages; who admits, also, it wasn’t the kind of book she’d pay for, yet somehow feels justified in posting the following review.

1.0 out of 5 stars
Dull and boring November 10, 2012
Format:Kindle Edition|Amazon Verified Purchase
If I cannot get interested in a book in the first two or three pages, I don't continue reading in the hopes that the plot will pick up. Such was the case with Lady Sarah's Redemption. From the start the author was overly descriptive with things that didn't really contribute to moving the plot along. The first few pages were so dull and boring, I knew I had no interest at all in finishing this book. Luckily it was free. I would have been very disappointed had I paid for it. There are so many books out there waiting to be sampled/read that I won't waste time on one that doesn't hold my interest from the start. This was a 'Kindle- delete'!
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Readers who indulge in free downloads of books only because they’re free are often the first to denounce them in a public forum.

People who pay money for a kindle download have usually decided it’s worth the price tag on the basis of the first chapter which is provided free.

So while free promotions can be great, first-time authors enrolled in Kindle Select must beware. Not all their readers will write a review with the respect and discernment generally displayed by those who’ve paid for it.

Monday, October 8, 2012

Free download of Lady Sarah's Redemption


After a fantastic holiday throughout South Australia - Adelaide and Clare Valley - as well as Naracoorte Caves and then by a beautiful lake near the Murrumbidgee in New South Wales, I'm home. Although I was laid low for a while in the midst of my travels, I'm now back in the saddle and delighted with the way my Kindle sales for A Little Deception are going.

Dad's beautiful view in the Clare Valley
I enrolled the re-edited, updated version into the Kindle Select program and had such a great response that I decided to enrol Lady Sarah's Redemption, which meant unpublishing it from Smashwords for the 90 days of the Kindle program.

Hence, Lady Sarah's Redemption is now available on October 9th and 10th (US time) as a free download here.

And now it's time to return to writing Book 2 of my Ellora's Cave upcoming release.

Last night I got the cover rough for my Pan MacMillan Momentum 10K story - Saving Grace. It's beautiful and once it's approved (though it is by me!) I'll post it here.


Monday, July 9, 2012

First foray into Self Publishing


My first foray into self-publishing begins this week now that I have the rights back to my three Regency Romantic Intrigues published in hardcover by Robert Hale.

So far I've commissioned artist Lyn Taylor to do the lovely cover. I'm hoping that by the end of the week I'll have done the in-between bits and it'll be available on Amazon. Also, that the process will be started for paperback editions.

Others who've blazed the trail before me have been very helpful with their advice and my darling husband came back from his overseas trip two nights ago with a neat little book outlining tips and pitfalls.

I'm looking forward to beginning and am in the process of going through the book again and making a few changes, though the story line will remain the same as outlined below:
Lady Sarah's Redemption 
When spoiled heiress Lady Sarah Miles assumes the identity of a drowned governess to escape marriage to her best friend, James, she thinks her troubles will be over within the fortnight.

Arriving at the grand estate of reformist MP Roland Hawthorne to take charge of the tortured widower's rebellious sixteen-year-old daughter, Caro, Sarah is caught up in a web of deceit that goes far beyond her own charade.

As Sarah battles her conscience, her courage is tested to extremes when she risks her own reputation to save Caro's. What began as an attempt to win Roland's affections now has all their lives hanging in the balance. Even if Roland forgives her, it may be too late.